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Author:	Jason_Clement
ASL Info:	17, male
Elite Ratio:	2.63 - 147/149/61
Words:	206

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Serious
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Self Control
by Jason C. Clement
© Jason C. Clement

Here's humanity, in all our righteousness
Embracing damnation and the media's perveted bliss
Here's the America's, countries all to strong
Leading the way, down the path of wrongs

Look upon the seas of mindwashed clones
Look upon our burning home (x2)

Here's our stories, written on blank white
Pages of nothing, stolen without a right
Here's natures rebellion, in form of our destruction
Erasing our lands, and all our steel constructions

Look upon the seas of mindwashed clones
Look upon our burning home (x2)

Let's go on a crusade
Half way around the world
Today seems like a good day
Our vision is slightly blurred
Let's dive into the weapons stock
And let our minds race
Let's listen to timer tick-tock
As the bombs get ready to fall

I will not become another mindless clone
Lead by the media
I will not lose my self control
To government
I want to live free of you
I want to live free of you

You won't steal my soul
Fuck you
You won't steal my soul

Look upon the seas of mindwashed clones
Look upon our burning home (x4)

Submitted on 2006-11-06 15:42:45 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  dude this was awsome. I like this part

I will not become another mindless clone
Lead by the media
I will not lose my self control
To government
I want to live free of you
I want to live free of you

You won't steal my soul
[censored] you
You won't steal my soul

u write awsomely
| Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
  remember me

you rock:)

and so does this poem
| Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by gloomyanddoomy | [ Reply to This ]
  impressed yet again!!
| Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by CFHillyard | [ Reply to This ]
  Jason
You never cease to amaze me
Where in the World did this World come from
You really are an amazing writer
How the heck do you do it
Every one of your writes is filled with not only emotion but your writes leave the reader with a need to want to learn more about the theme
That my Friend is talent pure and simple
I also like how in this write you showed that probably the hardest thing in the World to do is be yourself when the media and others always shove down your throat exactly how you are supposed to act and live
Excellent Job Jason
I Loved this
Cant wait for your next write
In Fact
I Honestly cany wait for your first album to be out
You better get me back stage passes
You know Ill be there!!!
God Bless
Ron
| Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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