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    dots Submission Name: Happy, or so I thoughtdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 915
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    Description:
       A poem about happiness and how I it wasn't real


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    dotsHappy, or so I thoughtdots
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    Today I smiled
    For the first time
    In a long while

    I truly felt happy
    No pain or sorrow
    A feeling I thought could never be

    I laughed a real laugh
    and listened to what you had to say
    I never thought I could be this way

    Today I looked at you
    With love and compassion
    Feelings oh so true

    All was right with the world
    I wanted to let out a happy scream
    But I woke up
    Seems my happiness.....

    Was only a dream.




    Submitted on 2006-11-06 18:44:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Not that was good, I really liked that poem. I totaly understand these feelings because I went through this type of sepression.

    LOL thanks for staking me, think i might do the same. LOL
    | Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by Autum-Moon | [ Reply to This ]
      really good write..and hits at home hard considering iv been having those dreams over and over recently sad stuff
    | Posted on 2006-11-06 00:00:00 | by CFHillyard | [ Reply to This ]


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