This castle

Author: drow ASL Info:    29/male/married Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 14 /16 /7 Words: 104

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This castle

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You want my castle? Come and take it. Many have tried and all have failed. We will fight to the death. With our last breath we will see this fight to the end. If we lose this castle and all our blood has been spilt our fight will continue. No one that stays here will never rest. Take my castle. Spell our blood and the fire from hell will consume you all. For when the last breath has stopped, This castle will be consumed by darkness and once again it will be my castle and we never be defeated

Submitted on 2006-11-07 12:00:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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hmmm. it's interesting but im not sure what kind of castle referance your going for. not that i have too, but... i like it

| Posted on 2006-11-07 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]

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