Description: life goes on, you have to choose whether to go on too or not
lost hopes -------------------------------------------
nothing to see
nothing to hear
endless abiss
yet nothing to fear
nothing to touch
no one to hold
empty suroundings
lifeless and cold
so open your eyes
arouse your lost hopes
awaken your limbs
and rise with new hopes
for pathetic you are
for staying so lost
cowaring inside yourself
content with life at no cost
move on and be seen
be heard as anew
for people like you
there are too few
Very good. Why is shadow speaking with a British accent, anyhow? We both know she's from PA... Aside from spelling errors that would be caught by a standard word processor, this piece is well-done.