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    dots Submission Name: Short Poemdots

    Author: Candale-Switch
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    1.34 - 42/31/7
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsShort Poemdots

    Step onto color's spectrum
    Cross this sightfull bliss
    To a relm born of magic.

    Submitted on 2006-11-07 14:42:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      short poem...you weren't kidding!
    well, i love the magical feel to this, i can see what lil gal means when she says rainbow. i know it sounds daft, but ya know in cartoons when the characters step through mirrors into another world or realm, well thats what this piece made me think of, with it's bright colors and magic.
    anyway, i really like this, all the more because it's so brief, this leaves it open for the readers imagination.
    thanks for sharing!
    | Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Makes me think of following a rainbow to the end where the gold is kept, or steppin into a different dimension where magic still exists and hasn't been destroyed by man. Keep up the great work.
    | Posted on 2006-11-07 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]

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