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    dots Submission Name: Sweet Caressesdots
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    Author: Glassy Eyed
    ASL Info:    17/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 550/427/187
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 181
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 570



    Description:
       Yeah...It's about sex...But it's also about love...


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    dotsSweet Caressesdots
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    What gentle hand caresses thee,
    Makes lovers eyes glaze over?
    Slipping into sweet surrender,
    Passion does take over.

    Silent moans go unnoticed,
    As screams of pleasure go by,
    And the most romantic kiss,
    Makes you ever so high.

    Tantalizing fingers,
    Dip deep into folds,
    Bliss and delight abound,
    Just to see what you have found.

    Enchantingly, sweet embrace,
    Two lovers’ meet their fate,
    Moving on into lovers’ land,
    They dare to open the gate.




    Submitted on 2006-11-07 15:48:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was a well written poem because of the rhyme in it. I liked the idea too, being of passion, love, drugs....all that life is made of. lol
    I would write more, like I always do....but the bell is about to ring, and I don't have time.

    But you need to know, this was a good piece.
    ~Strator
    | Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by Strator | [ Reply to This ]
      id say ur in love or kno what it is , ur poem is the best way to discribe they way love feels .
    i liked it!
    --Xat
    | Posted on 2006-11-07 00:00:00 | by kantvnh | [ Reply to This ]



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