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    dots Submission Name: Forget Me Notdots
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    Author: Two Meters Away
    ASL Info:    16/F/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    0.91 - 172/43/29
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 890
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1482



    Description:
       I tried writing a song (I used whatever came to mind) while listening to another song.. I just tried to make it go with the beat. Yeah, it didn't come out so bad. Thoughts?


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    dotsForget Me Notdots
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    What's happened?
    The world is turning, but you're not
    Forget me not
    And drop the lie

    You're burning
    You're drowning
    I extend a helping hand
    Don't you turn this down

    You worship
    You praise
    You're better than this
    Forget me not

    Spare me one word

    Hey lonely,
    Hey lover,
    What has become of your worth?
    Eight hours isn't long enough
    Anymore

    What's happened?
    The world is turning, but you're not
    Forget me not
    Drop the lie

    Stop believing the band-wagon of lies
    They roll into your bedroom every morning
    You feed on it, you live by it
    Drop it
    I'm sick of being the pillow
    To soften the blow

    Hey lonely,
    Hey lover,
    What has become of your worth?
    Eight hours isn't long enough
    Anymore

    Forget me not
    I dream but no one's making it reality
    I think but no one's putting it on paper
    I wonder but no one's answering
    I love but you're not here

    Yeah, you better run
    Drop the lie

    Hey lonely,
    Hey lover,
    Bittersweet one
    You taste sweet tonight
    Spare me one word
    I need you so
    Yeah, don't forget me
    Forget me not




    Submitted on 2006-11-07 19:05:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is really good. My only complant is that its a little too long and repetitive in some parts, and i got bored. But then again, i do have a short attention span. :)
    write on,
    Lanna
    | Posted on 2006-11-07 00:00:00 | by EmeRalDEyeZ5491 | [ Reply to This ]


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