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In a row


Author: darkwiccan14
Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 125 /125 /88
Words: 32
Class/Type: Limerick /Comedy
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i'm bored as h***


In a row



Empty as a box,
sitting here in my orange stripped socks,
wonderin how many words I can rhyme in a row,
and woo! I just won a game of Tic-Tac-Toe!





Submitted on 2006-11-07 21:12:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i love limericks thats what i specialise in so this was cool to me
| Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by DonkeyMan | [ Reply to This ]
  well done ya made me giggle lol. you win a white paper hat, feel free to print it out and fold it yourself *instructions not included*. sweet poem, nuff said. x

~lou~
| Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]


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