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    dots Submission Name: evil wizardsdots

    Author: brokenbatman
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 475/233/44
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       trying to save all the information from a sudden ground breaking of on e of my stories, please tell me how you interpret the plot

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    dotsevil wizardsdots

    scared to find what the dark one
    has done
    terrified little army trembling
    as one
    cowards do not exist within
    my ranks
    searching he has one
    of ours
    flaunts powers on mount high
    so unreal
    claims to be hinding right in front of
    our eyes
    checking small spaces
    from the shell
    turned to large worlds
    from within
    an eternity could be spent in a single nook
    or crany
    but a rough hasty search is all the time
    we have
    to much ground to cover in zero time
    for our friend
    wizards world hidden to me but not
    to them
    terrified of his power has shown
    so vast
    visit from his most fearsome soldier to give
    the key
    for some strange reason his visciousness
    doesn't scare me
    behind his glare and snarl a truth I find
    from within
    the biggest advantage pointed out
    to me
    the knowledge of who he fears
    found at last
    if I ever I finally reach my
    devestated will be his

    Submitted on 2004-05-28 02:12:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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