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    dots Submission Name: A Fall daydots
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    Author: Tenirsk
    ASL Info:    16/F/N/A
    Elite Ratio:    4.16 - 4/17/29
    Words: 490
    Class/Type: Prose/Passion
    Total Views: 115
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    Bytes: 2674



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    dotsA Fall daydots
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    Do you know what today is? It’s just another day; another day to make beautiful. It’s days like these that stand true, days like these where you know that it doesn’t matter if you spill something on your favorite pair of jeans; days like these that no matter what, it’s a good day.

    It’s a day made to be beautiful, a day that makes you sway to music in your head as if you’re love struck. Normally- routinely days blur into each other, another after another, then again and again; over and over. I bet you didn’t know, that today -only today is a day made to be beautiful. When tomorrow comes, I bet you didn’t know- but when tomorrow is a today; it’s a day made to be beautiful. Everyday here and after is a day made to be beautiful.

    It’s hard to make a day lovely when such things as complications in society stray in your mind. How you look has nothing to do with how you feel- so don’t dwell. Concentrate on simple things; pure things. It’s easy to ignore, just for a simple day. Enjoy the turning of foliage as it borders on the threshold of winter and summer. Fall is made to be beautiful, falling is made to be gorgeous. The tumbling feeling, the butterflies- it’s all falling. When you stand on a ledge it’s easy to gaze and see, when you fall you only feel.

    Thinking complicates, feeling simplifies. So it today your good day? Make today a fall day- fall in love, fall without regret or remorse to where you may land. You live just to fall, don’t you know? To fall, land- regain footing and climb again- only to feel the fleeting pleasure of falling. Again and again- that’s what makes days like these beautiful; it’s a high going down. Linger- teeter it’s all rise and fall. Falling of breath, rising of passion, falling in love- rising of success. Rise, fall- today is a beautiful day.

    Rise to the occasion, and fall into a bliss unlike any other. It’s a euphoria like no other because.. It’s you- you make your days beautiful. The climb is worth the fall- the fall worthy of the climb. What’s more beautiful, climbing or falling? Half the pleasure of climbing- more the fun of falling.

    I think it would be best if you let go of the ledge now, border on insanity; that’s what happiness is- insanity because no one understands; no one falls the same way. If you’re waiting for someone to jump with you it’s a waste of good day. Foliage doesn’t fall and flitter to the ground at the same time.

    Those brave enough to have a good day can follow. Those weary can linger longer- but we’ll meet at the top again when tomorrow is today, and it’s another beautiful day.




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      So it today your good day? My only grip was this little mistake.

    Again and again... you had this in one of your later paragraphs after having called boring days boring, well because they were routine and repetitive. But if you fall again, and again, don't you think that after a while that would become routine? Maybe take a different perspective - like accentuating how unpredictable a fall can be, just that it's need you to jump before it can happen. Maybe you meant that the act of jumping itself would be repetitive, but not the fall.. who knows at this point. I enjoyed this text because it reminds me of how I thought back in the day... when I had 'gotten out of depression.' Things can be fun if you let them be; the rose only smells good if you take the time to stop, go and take a sniff. But what makes these things even funner, is when they are unexpected - it leaves you wondering whether it was luck or fate that you should have lived out that day, in that way. I do have another grip with the idea behind this prose writing though, because this falling act is only possible on a daily basis when you aren't attached to anything in particular, when you don't favor one thing over another - when everything is equal in the quality of simply being a whim. Otherwise you jump with the intentions of falling a certain way, which makes you blind to certain other ways... Do you get where I am coming from? You've got the harder half of it down though, so kudos!

    Outlaw
    | Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by Outlaw | [ Reply to This ]



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