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    dots Submission Name: Sun Setdots
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    Author: Non-Sens-Uality
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 67/80/53
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsSun Setdots
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    The sun sets at the dark horizon
    Of my passion - purple clouds
    Close the day beyond my mansion
    Beyond crimson lakes of doubts -
    And the atmosphere - grey tension
    Electricity surrounds -

    My hands, in glows of hellish flames
    Hold on to this one only ray
    My eyes tell you about the games
    I never was supposed to play
    And all the tears, and all the names
    My lips would say -

    But are concealed, and bound eternal -
    To the night, and to thy kiss
    The evil sacrament, my journal -
    With blood I write and hope for bliss.
    But I will fall, for I'm an angel...
    Remember this -

    I fall from grace, I fall for you
    Doomed in obsessions riddle -
    I prayed for it to be untrue
    To be unreal or in the middle -
    Of nowhere, without time - a view
    Of neverending EVIL...




    Submitted on 2006-11-08 14:32:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Surreal and picturesque with an excellent flow and amazing choice of words. Every line is a jump - like something I would never expect to be connected to the previous line. But then again, with a mind such as yours, is it a surprise?
    | Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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