Description: Ok.. this is something new I'm trying.. At the end, it's spaced b/c her mind is racing, was trying to protray that in my writing... Hope you like
She seen something no one was supposed to see
One early morning while out for a stroll along the sea
She heard something no one was supposed to hear
Now all she knew was she needed to get out of here
Before somebody figured out that she was near by
It was time to tell the beautiful crashing waves good-bye
Slowly and quietly she tried to flee but
Suddenly she felt a painful sting in her butt
She had been shot and didnt know what to do
Tripping over her own shadow she fell face first in the dew
Straining to see how many there were she could only see two
Now it wasn't just her butt hurting but her heart was too
Sweating and fighting back tears she tried to stand up
The men were in her face yelling at her to stand the fuck up
Crying she stumbled backwards even though she was sore
Oh God how she was wishing she had wings and could soar
Over their heads and right out of there
Leaving them behind with their
Ugly clothes they wear
Not caring where
She went as long as she would be
Away from them, alone as could be
Reality stuck her like a pin
She realized they had put her in a pen
Dead bodies laying everywhere
Not wanting to move anywhere
She curled into a ball
The men were laughing, having a ball
ok this was cool in the begining but u lost it at the end don t know what u tring, but I think this is ment to be together n no spacen I think, but I want to reade the next paragraph of the story.