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    dots Submission Name: Beachdots
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    Author: Smee
    ASL Info:    17/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 28/33/11
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 89
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Lies a box within a box
    Sits a mind inside a mind
    Stands a man contained

    Walk with twilight to the left and keep the world towards the right
    For there is little to the right.
    A pause to breathe and lie again
    Now twilight is above and we sink into the world
    Encased in grains, and the bars behind the eyes
    Enclosed in supplication and the divine
    The pause to breathe has left us choking
    Smothered
    Drowning
    Trapped.

    Obsessed with words
    A web of infinitesimally small, intangible things
    Twisted into the noose of conversation.
    Possessed by lies
    The fluid grains into which we sink
    Conceived as the histories of our own creation.

    Water.
    Water upon the left and warm flickers towards the right
    For there is little to the right
    Twilight is behind and the dark is above
    To stand, to step, to walk, to run
    But now just to lie
    In the cold, sodden left and the warm, barren right
    For there is little to the right
    Possibility to the left
    A cold, sodden possibility
    But now we lie
    Obsessed
    Silent
    Caged




    Submitted on 2006-11-08 14:59:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i felt it.

    and that's all you should ever need to know.
    | Posted on 2006-11-10 00:00:00 | by taramarie | [ Reply to This ]



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