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    dots Submission Name: To the owner of the field kicker;dots
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    Author: Adden Lee
    ASL Info:    19/Female/Changing Always
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 39/35/17
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1056
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 407



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       ...about my neighbors little yelpy dogs. if that thing goes near my wolves again I'm going to unleash them.


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    dotsTo the owner of the field kicker;dots
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    Your dog began yelping again,

    Which started my dog barking again.

    So I unleashed my mut,

    And I must say I finally agree with you on something,

    He does need betetr training.

    For when I told him to sit and heel,

    He simply wouldn't listen.

    So I am returnign to you you purebred's collar.




    Submitted on 2006-11-08 17:29:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Funny in a mean way, would make a good short song at a live performance.
    | Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by Ygi | [ Reply to This ]


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