[
Join Free!
]
(No Spam mail)
RolePlay
Join Us
Writings
Shoutbox
Community
Digg Mashup
Mp3 Search
Online Education
My Youtube
Ear Training
Funny Pics
Role Play
Piano Music
Free Videos
Web 2.0
<<
|
>>
Submission Name:
To the owner of the field kicker;
--------------------------------------------------------
Author:
Adden Lee
ASL Info:
19/Female/Changing Always
Elite Ratio:
2.97 - 39/35/17
Words:
62
Class/Type:
Poetry/Misc
Total Views:
1056
Average Vote:
No vote yet.
Bytes:
407
Description:
...about my neighbors little yelpy dogs. if that thing goes near my wolves again I'm going to unleash them.
To the owner of the field kicker;
-------------------------------------------
Your dog began yelping again,
Which started my dog barking again.
So I unleashed my mut,
And I must say I finally agree with you on something,
He does need betetr training.
For when I told him to sit and heel,
He simply wouldn't listen.
So I am returnign to you you purebred's collar.
Submitted on 2006-11-08 17:29:11
Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Submissions: [
Previous
] [
Next
]
Rate This Submission
1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!
||| Comments |||
Funny in a mean way, would make a good short song at a live performance.
| Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by
Ygi
| [
Reply to This
]
Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [
Guidelines
]
1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?
124309
Jimmy Ruska
Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.
Enter your search terms
Submit search form
Web
www.eliteskills.com
Login
User Name:
Password:
[
Quick Signup
]
[
Lost Password
]
January 10 07
131,497 Poems
Posted
I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my
Video Tutorials
[
Angst Poetry
]
[
Cutters
]
[
Famous Poetry
]
[
Poetry Scams
]
FontSize:
[ Smaller ]
[ Bigger ]