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    dots Submission Name: Last Kissdots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    61/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747/570/167
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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    dotsLast Kissdots
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    The years have passed reflecting
    how the heart's own scars salve pain.
    Hidden thoughts so dejecting,
    these views, deep within, have lain.

    His last memory welling,
    rising like toast of the wine...
    it's a glance so compelling,
    recalling her kiss divine.




    Submitted on 2006-11-08 19:50:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really liked this poem. it was short, sweet, and showed the meaning behind it, but leaving room for your own interpretation. i thought it was great.

    shay
    | Posted on 2007-01-25 00:00:00 | by shayla8911 | [ Reply to This ]
      awwww. this poem is lovely. i loved every bit of it. i like tahts its short but carries a strong message to you. in just a few words.

    great write!

    :] Mandi
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Is this love? | [ Reply to This ]
      Aaaah, Peggy! Wonderful poem, this! Love never dies, and its' memories treasure ( or torment) us forevermore! Here's to love, and to you gal!
    | Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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