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    dots Submission Name: Pleasently Painful Lustdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 594
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    Description:
       A poem about painful lust...


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    dotsPleasently Painful Lustdots
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    Fire burning
    Beneath my flesh
    Slowing yearning
    For more

    Touch me roughly
    Make me feel the pain
    Bite to break skin
    Please do it again

    Tie me up
    Like your own personal whore
    While I bleed and scream
    For so much more

    Hit me fast
    So I can feel
    This burning last
    It so unreal

    Screw me
    Oh so nice
    Let me have it
    Just one little slice

    So young and dumb
    Burn my flesh
    Until I'm numb
    and nothing is left





    Submitted on 2006-11-08 20:47:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow this is a bit extreme for my personal voyages into the sexual world but i can appreciate your art and it exquisite. Loved every word of it. The flow was great, i would have loved for it to be continued even one more stanza.

    Yours,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-11-15 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      The eroticism of bondage so skillfully done with a few images. Each little fragment brings out a new facet. Liked it very much
    | Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by Raghavan | [ Reply to This ]


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