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    dots Submission Name: Ode to the Tub-o-cookiesdots

    Author: jennah
    ASL Info:    19/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    4.07 - 101/73/22
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
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       Umm...we stole the cookies. To my Lindsey...the bestest room mate ever and my willing partner in crime.

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    dotsOde to the Tub-o-cookiesdots

    Monster cookies in a tub
    sitting on our floor,
    hurry up and eat them all,
    quick now, lock the door.
    We needed us some sugar
    and needed it so soon,
    that is why the tub-o-cookies
    now lives in our room.
    Don't be sad if you can't find them
    or angry that their gone.
    Just come to visit us...
    the cookies must go on!

    Submitted on 2006-11-08 22:54:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      mmm... Jenna so unlike you...stealing! OH NO!!! lol! sounds like your having fun just being yourself!! And you are showing your true colors... yikes! ( :
    | Posted on 2006-11-13 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      This so reminded me of a fairytale. I have no idea why. I don't know whether it's supposed to be funny but to me it was kind of sweet.
    P.S. I love your user image :)
    | Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      Good. good
    But keep them locked
    and your hands tied
    so that your teeth are saved.
    | Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by Raghavan | [ Reply to This ]

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