Description: "and if the elevator tries to bring you down.......Go Crazy!...OK Let's Go!"
Flight of the Squirrel -------------------------------------------
A motorcycling horse revolves
Round and round the skull
Reving a rainbow flood
The storm ducts will burst soon
And any slight recognition will be lost
Inject me with emerald libations
And lights of Prague and Sao Paulo
Ejection mutates dark to bright
When rotation ushers night
State your name and purpose
And I'll guide you through
Nonsense Valley
Up will be up
As long as you believe in me
Down will be down
But will not make a sound
And we'll eat salsa of the Gods
And sip the nectar of seduction
The Earth may stand still
For our souls to roost
With puffed breasts
Gloating with childlike intensity
hey, i liked this one. i actually like the whole up is up and down is down part. it was different than the rest, but i like the aesthetic simplicity of that stanza. inject me with emeral libations is a great line!
I enjoy the imagery of 'for our souls to roost/with puffed breasts/gloating with childlike intensity' and also 'inject me with emerald libations.' However, the up will be up stanza feels a bit forced to me, and doesn't fall into the same easy and etheral pattern of the rest of the piece. I like the overall live-on-your-own-terms feeling it portrays. Nice work.
Gotdamn right Ratso you tell em what it is! Fuccin squirrels, chickens, rats, pigeons, and baby kitties. Dude this is one of the more, dare I say serious one's you've done. You must be gettin ready for tommorrow. Have heart brother. Take it and walk away! Anyway back to the business at hand. This had alot of really memorable (did I spell that wrong?) lines in it. More introspective, only cuz I know you. Later
Submission Name: Flight of the Squirrel
