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    dots Submission Name: strawberry blooddots
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    Author: PoeticNonsense
    ASL Info:    20/f/around
    Elite Ratio:    3.82 - 205/215/100
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    Bytes: 372



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       dont take this seriously. i dont.


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    dotsstrawberry blooddots
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    students lean over tables
    intent on the experiment.
    extracting the DNA
    from a strawberry.
    sickened, i turn away.
    it is only a twist of fate
    that makes the strawberries the victims.
    it could just as easily
    be the students laying on the tables
    as minute strawberry overlords
    extract THEIR DNA.




    Submitted on 2006-11-09 10:15:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2007-02-09 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes! Finally a comrad in the art of nonsensical imagery. You do it with heart, I can tell. Cheers to you. That is quite frightening by the way. "Strawberry overloards". Genius!

    p.s.- check my work, you may find it slightly comparable.
    | Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by Ratmeat | [ Reply to This ]
      Um...Ok...and I'm a joggly woggly jello.
    | Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      You raise a puzzle I could never answer. Is it good to sacrifice a few for the benifit of all. War and death penalty raise the same question.
    | Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by Raghavan | [ Reply to This ]


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