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Submission Name: strawberry blood dots

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Author:	PoeticNonsense
ASL Info:	20/f/around
Elite Ratio:	3.82 - 205/215/100
Words:	54

Class/Type:	Poetry/Comedy
Total Views:	999
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	372

Description:
dont take this seriously. i dont.

strawberry blood dots

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students lean over tables
intent on the experiment.
extracting the DNA
from a strawberry.
sickened, i turn away.
it is only a twist of fate
that makes the strawberries the victims.
it could just as easily
be the students laying on the tables
as minute strawberry overlords
extract THEIR DNA.

Submitted on 2006-11-09 10:15:00 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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2: I dunno...
3: meh!
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  LMFAO...............
wow........................................
still lmfao
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wew.........
okay im done.
| Posted on 2007-02-09 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
  Yes! Finally a comrad in the art of nonsensical imagery. You do it with heart, I can tell. Cheers to you. That is quite frightening by the way. "Strawberry overloards". Genius!

p.s.- check my work, you may find it slightly comparable.
| Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by Ratmeat | [ Reply to This ]
  Um...Ok...and I'm a joggly woggly jello.
| Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
  You raise a puzzle I could never answer. Is it good to sacrifice a few for the benifit of all. War and death penalty raise the same question.
| Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by Raghavan | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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