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    dots Submission Name: My Lorddots

    Author: annie smith
    ASL Info:    20/f
    Elite Ratio:    5.26 - 75/61/24
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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       welli was in church and this idea hit me and...

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    dotsMy Lorddots

    a heart of gold
    a mind so bold
    a wonderful love
    from above

    setting a tradition
    by one on a mission
    preaching God's word
    for all to be heard

    a carpentor's son
    but a faith he brgun
    a shepered to the human race
    one like us, a common face

    he beared the cross
    worried not the loss
    he shouldered the pain
    though, for him, no gain

    so lift your voice
    sing praise and rejoise
    for only his love
    took us to heaven above

    he is my Lord
    forever adored
    Jesus Christ
    only he will suffice

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    Just the essence of Christianity...

    you put it well in words......

    nice work.
    | Posted on 2007-10-31 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
      Its a good poem, I'm not really a big christianity fan, but this was good none the less. Shadow
    | Posted on 2007-10-28 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this passion, All i can say is well done! This passion has open up my old cold heart.
    Be good. yours H.Redd
    | Posted on 2007-10-26 00:00:00 | by H.Redd | [ Reply to This ]
      Very Very Beautiful Write
    The message is beautiful and true and I Love the way this whole write flowed together perfectly
    The Lord is the Savior of the World and with him in your Life
    One can escape the Negativity of the World and move Forward into Eternal Life
    Excellent Work
    I am making this a Favorite
    God Bless

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      this is lovely.

    "he beared the cross
    worried not the loss
    he shouldered the pain
    though, for him, no gain"

    that one hit my heart. :)
    | Posted on 2006-11-11 00:00:00 | by everafter | [ Reply to This ]

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