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    dots Submission Name: don't mess with my moon!dots
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    Author: dog died
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    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    dotsdon't mess with my moon!dots
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    don't mess with my moon
    you will pay for the destuction
    you will die
    you will be miserable the rest of you'r short life
    I won't save you no one will
    DON"T MESS WITH MY MOON...




    Submitted on 2006-11-09 15:30:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I dont get it. But I know I wont be touching your moon anytime soon.
    | Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by Thornful Rose | [ Reply to This ]
      where did you come with this poem
    | Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by gloomyanddoomy | [ Reply to This ]


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