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    dots Submission Name: Archer of Lovedots
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    Author: Cora Windover
    ASL Info:    1,292/it/Radiant Garden
    Elite Ratio:    4.15 - 862/763/204
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1263
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 478



    Description:
       if anyone has read my poem "Accursed Fate," which hardly anyone has because it's HIDEOUSLY LONG =^..^= this is about the characters of Eclipse and Eros.



    Aside from Accursed Fate, this poem was based on a story of mine (the LONG opem was based on the same one, duh) and... it's about two of the characters, I'm not really sure at what point in their relationship this is... I'm not even sure what situation it describes o_O


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    dotsArcher of Lovedots
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    Shoot my heart and leave me
    I'm lying here, I'm bleeding
    And I wish those sky-blue eyes
    Would look this way just one more time
    Gold arrows draw steel tears
    From this stone-cold heart of mine
    And the fire will be burning
    From this final day of learning
    I will listen to this rhyme
    'Til the final breath of time
    "Gold arrows draw steel tears
    From this stone-cold heart of mine."




    Submitted on 2004-05-28 09:27:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow!!! i really like this poem, the images are very vivid and they kind of make me picture what it would look like!! very cool!!http://eliteskills.com/yay.gif
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    | Posted on 2004-05-28 00:00:00 | by prettygrnEyes | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh my good this is really really good. I think it's really good, the rhyme really flows excelently, and makes it even better..
    | Posted on 2004-05-28 00:00:00 | by Nagow | [ Reply to This ]
      that was a good poem i likes the line "Gold arrows draw steel tears" i don't know why but i just liked it
    and that picture is it you it is wierd in a good way
    | Posted on 2004-05-28 00:00:00 | by kellz | [ Reply to This ]


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