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    dots Submission Name: Mournful Tearsdots
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    Author: D.C.M.
    ASL Info:    18/M/TN.
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 73/107/71
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 147
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    Bytes: 467



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       I wrote it in Multimedia class!!!! lol. It sucks I know, but hey... so does life.


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    Shedding mournful tears.
    Lost am I,
    Upon this dreadful place.
    Wondering about this lonesome hell.
    Intolerable feelings of bereavement
    Seal my psyche with images of razor blades.
    Steadly, I slice my wrist.
    Diminishing my existence.
    One thought of happiness strikes my head.
    "Sarah, ... I miss you" I cry into the dark.
    I quickly descend onto the dirt.
    Ending my existence.




    Submitted on 2006-11-10 07:21:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is good, sad but good. ANd I can relate with the exception of the spoken words. Grood write. Keep on writing.

    Sarah
    | Posted on 2007-03-05 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]



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