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    dots Submission Name: Unknowabledots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsUnknowabledots
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    Do not speak
    of what you don't know.
    Keep your mouth shut,
    and tongue under control.
    The things you know
    are dull and bland.
    Don't try to learn,
    you can't understand.
    The depths of the mind
    are hard to reach.
    The defenses of mine
    cannot be breached.
    You speak to me,
    as if you're smart.
    You understand nothing
    of the heart.
    Do not pretend
    to know me.
    Do not act,
    if you cannot be.




    Submitted on 2006-11-10 08:34:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the flows a bit of but the rhyme is once again excellent. I wouldn't know wether this is dedicated to someone or not but it sounds like it. Pretty angry I'd say. Sounds like something Linkin Park would perform.
    | Posted on 2006-11-13 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      imply very good..Keep it up..My bet wishes
    | Posted on 2006-11-10 00:00:00 | by Morphy | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah, I'm the first to comment! I'm so happy you're back, I mean I've been waiting for your writings...this is true, people do try to speak like they have intelligence...when they know nothing at all...

    what is intelligence really?


    | Posted on 2006-11-10 00:00:00 | by Twisted | [ Reply to This ]


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