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    dots Submission Name: Summer's Nightdots
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    Author: everafter
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 38/33/10
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 98
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       My first submission.


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    dotsSummer's Nightdots
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    Breathe like it's your last
    The unfamiliar scent of a new beginning
    Flares through the skin of the passerby
    Igniting old feelings and sorrow

    Glimpse the full moon
    In all its splendor and glory
    Take in the night and its stillness
    Broken by the cry of the helpless
    Broken by the cry of the free

    Roar of a shameless engine
    Pierces through the blanket of darkness
    Currents of electricity, chasing lights
    The world in your eyes




    Submitted on 2006-11-10 09:25:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is lovely, Kez, and the title is Dynamite! I especially like

    "Breathe like it's your last
    The unfamiliar scent of a new beginning"

    You have a remarkable talent, and we'd all like to see more of your work!!
    | Posted on 2006-11-15 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I love your choice of words and it sounds very poetic, but it's kind of confusing and hard to follow. What's this engine? What is it doing?
    | Posted on 2006-11-10 00:00:00 | by Two Meters Away | [ Reply to This ]



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