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    dots Submission Name: What If...dots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 537
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    Description:
       Poem my friend and I wrote during Science class, it kind of sucks, but just shows you what two teens do constructively in science class.


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    What if you said no?
    Shot me down with just one blow
    What if you said yes?
    Just to put me though your test
    What if you made me cry
    or hurt me deep down inside?
    What if you bring me joy?
    Would you still want to be my boy?
    What if you feel the same
    Or are you just playing a game?
    What if you were my Romeo
    Would me heart tell me so?
    What if she trid to take you away
    Would you really want her too?
    What if I gave you a kiss
    Would it end in shear bliss?
    What if you moved away?
    Would your feelings for me stay?
    What if your love for me was just a pawn
    Or would it go on and on?
    What if I took off my mask?
    Would acceptance be a big task?
    What ifs are all that haunt my dream
    Make love better that what it seems.




    Submitted on 2006-11-10 15:14:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aww this is sweet..
    and kind of suprizing that it was written by 2 teens in a science class,,whenever i try to write something with a friend,,it doesnt normally come out serious..lol.
    but yea the rhyming was awesome & everything that a mind whats to know.
    it might be the starting of a relationship or the start of some awkward-ness..
    anyway,this is greatly put together.
    I enjoyed reading
    | Posted on 2006-11-10 00:00:00 | by _Dancing_Alone_ | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellent job with this one Shelby or Shannon
    You ask many questions that every person would Love to know when they are in a relationship with someone
    I like the way you put this together and the rhyme theme carried very nicely straight through
    Excellent Job!!!
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-11-10 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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