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    dots Submission Name: Cinnamon, spice & everything nicedots
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    Author: Mykquillion
    ASL Info:    20/M/NEB
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 109/124/41
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    Description:
       Preparing for the season, missing a lot of people, worried how it'll go, and a lot of gifts to buy.


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    dotsCinnamon, spice & everything nicedots
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    Fall is gone,
    Leaves crumbled,
    Wool socks to be worn,
    Shorts tucked away.
    Prepare to party,
    In the sweater granny made.

    A new season is born,
    Like a child brought into the world;
    Ugly.
    Letís call it Winter, she says.

    Family fights and fruitcake
    Gleeful gift giving
    Effort leads to ecstasy and eggnog,

    But will they enjoy my gifts?

    Suspense builds on the Eve,
    No sleep will be attained
    The day before such a day.

    I wake up and run down the stairs,
    But Santa is gone,
    Instead, waits my family.

    Palms sweaty.

    They finally rip off the wrapper
    Under the Christmas wreath,
    And their faces light up,

    And in the end,
    The joy of the season
    Surpasses the awfulness of the season.




    Submitted on 2006-11-10 22:49:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this brings me back to when I was a child and still very excited about the opening of gifts. Now my sisters yank the sheets off at 6 am and I roll over and go back to sleep : ) It's still fun, but somehow the child-like joy is lost amist the stress.
    ~orange
    | Posted on 2007-01-25 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good. I always loved Christmas when I was younger, along with the cold weather. Now, I don't like the holiday so much as I like the season. Especially when it snows. Good write.

    ~Nicole
    | Posted on 2006-11-11 00:00:00 | by PiperH | [ Reply to This ]
      This completly reminds me of winter, Christmass and New Years eve from back when I was just a kid. It's so different the way you see things when you're a child. It really made me remember some things. It think this is great, atmospheric and picturesque.
    | Posted on 2006-11-11 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow this totally reminded me of the christmas that I got an easy bake oven... lol!

    Great job, it really brings into perspective how quickly Christmas is coming up and how the holiday season brings out emotions and things that any other season doesn't.
    | Posted on 2006-11-17 00:00:00 | by Elissar | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh man. Thats perfect for the season and holiday coming so soon. A great write to remind everyone about it all, the good and the bad.

    Im not ready either. Getting myself paranoid about all the gifts and things needing to be got and done. Ya know? :) Geez
    | Posted on 2006-11-13 00:00:00 | by dreamer37517 | [ Reply to This ]


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