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    dots Submission Name: Daddy I Love You!!!!dots
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    Author: fireflye
    ASL Info:    15/f/cananda/toronto
    Elite Ratio:    2.16 - 11/28/20
    Words: 224
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 219
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    Description:
       i love my daday but he don't love me!!!!!


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    dotsDaddy I Love You!!!!dots
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    Daddy i love u no matter
    wat pain u caused

    Daddy i love u there's
    no need for a second
    thought, even thou i
    don't say it i feel it
    and i know u do too!!

    You are my world
    You are my guardian
    no one protects me like you do
    it's out of love i understand!

    your compassionate,kind and
    sweet your like no other man
    I've met.

    Daddy i would love it if you
    would give me another chance

    Daddy there's not a moment i
    don't think of you or how've
    I've hurt you.

    it's like a battle that's
    just begun and i feel like
    I'm trying to win your love

    it's like a continuous beat
    of love and hate
    there's secrets untold and
    they will be shared in the
    letters to come

    Lies were told hearts were
    broke i would like to mend
    your with my words

    Daddy keep on trying and
    know that i will always
    be with you in your heart
    and nothing could break
    that bond for i am your
    daughter and always will
    be.

    And don't forget you are
    my father and always will
    be

    DADDY I LOVE YOU AND ALWAYS WILL!!!




    Submitted on 2006-11-11 13:31:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ok i have to comment on this one because it made me tear up there quite abit, i defently felt this one idk i can realte at least in some aspects i always felt like i had to win my dads love anyway i really really like this one, this is a fantastic write i really do envy your writeing skills
    -Jess-
    | Posted on 2007-01-07 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]



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