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    dots Submission Name: knight in shining armordots
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    Author: annie smith
    ASL Info:    20/f
    Elite Ratio:    5.26 - 75/61/24
    Words: 245
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
    Total Views: 739
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1591



    Description:
       this can be about any one but i wrote it thinking about my Lord


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    dotsknight in shining armordots
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    When the road got rough
    And i stumbeled and fell
    Got battered and bruised
    On the road called life
    That's when my faith grew
    With my belief in you

    **you are my knight in shining armor
    Your the truth with in my heart
    And I'll all ways love you
    My knight
    My soul
    And your armor never tarnishes
    It's made as strong as you**

    You gave me love
    You're the reason for my hope
    Through thisk and thin
    Pain and joy
    You were there
    Galloping twards me
    to catch me when i fall

    ** you are my knight in shining arnor
    Your the truth with in my heart
    And I'll all ways love you
    My knight
    My soul
    And your armor never tarnishes
    It's made as strong as you**

    Hold me close to you
    Don't let me wonder too far
    I feel safe near you
    You are my rock
    My protector
    Now my faith grows with in you
    My life
    My soul
    My knight

    **you are my knight in shining armor
    Your the truth with in my heart
    And I'll all ways love you
    My knight
    My soul
    And your armor never tarnishes
    It's made as strong as you**

    **you are my knight in shining armor
    Your the truth with in my heart
    And I'll all ways love you
    My knight
    My soul
    And your armor never tarnishes
    It's made as strong as you**




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    ||| Comments |||
      Haha, I'd like to see this is a song, it sounds pretty good. Hope to hear more. Shadow
    | Posted on 2007-10-28 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      this was very nicely written... at first when i saw the title i thought, how cliché, but when i read the whole poem, i realized why it had to be called that. anyway, i think that after reading some of your other poems, God is your best inspiration for writing. so dont stop. keep on writing and i hope to read more of your pieces.

    nice write
    kat
    | Posted on 2006-12-28 00:00:00 | by moonlitsky | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this. The "Hold me close to you.." stanza is just so sweet. Nice job :)
    | Posted on 2006-11-11 00:00:00 | by everafter | [ Reply to This ]
      Annie, I wanted to come back to your site and read more of your poetry and verse. I see a developing talent in you, and real passion in your writing! This is a fine developing song! Take time with your spelling and meter. Congratulations to a lovely young lady of verse!!!
    | Posted on 2006-11-12 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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