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    dots Submission Name: Pawnographydots
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    Author: NoMartyr
    ASL Info:    18/M/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 33/97/91
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 1008
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1463



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    dotsPawnographydots
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    Me, this ain't a part of me
    I need this just to breathe
    Overwhelmingly

    I can't keep coming back
    Just to find myself coming back again

    I'm not gonna sell my guitar for crack
    I'm not gonna sell my guitar for crack
    I'm not gonna sell my guitar for crack
    I'm not gonna sell my guitar for crack

    Don't, don't know what I'll do
    When this is all through
    And I can't express myself
    'Cause my medium is gone

    Think I'll stop myself from coming back again

    I'm not gonna sell my guitar for crack
    I have to sell my guitar for crack
    I can't sell my guitar for crack
    I have to sell my guitar for crack

    Don't call me a liar
    'Cause Charlie's on fire
    I'm comin' back again

    Don't ask for a lighter
    I'm high as a kiter
    I'm home again

    Don't ask for my money
    I just spent it all
    On my last eight ball

    Hope you like this one
    It will be my last one
    'Cause I'm sellin' my guitar for crack

    I'm gonna sell my guitar for crack
    I'm gonna sell my guitar for crack
    I'm gonna sell my guitar for crack
    I'm gonna sell my guitar for crack




    Submitted on 2006-11-11 14:48:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      weird. very strange so did ou wind up selling you guitar for crack? :)
    | Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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