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    Author: CFHillyard
    ASL Info:    22/M/Washington state
    Elite Ratio:    1.91 - 53/36/13
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 696
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 960



    Description:
       i guess its time to move on


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    So now its time for a new begining
    one lacking all of my sinning
    can i do it do i believe?
    i dont know but i do at least have the will to achieve

    can i stop the lying?
    does it even matter that now im trying?
    i do my best to survive
    i never meant to bring down anothers life
    its just what i do
    it is me through and through

    but i guess its up to me to end this loop
    no need to grow old with eyes that sag and droop
    im gonna rewrite my family tree
    going to make sure everyone remembers me

    so dont say goodbye
    just remember when you see me please say hi
    cause this is already the past
    something we all know can never last

    so if ever again you see me around
    just say hi, you wont look a clown
    and remember this, i dont forget the past
    even though i do know
    it has already passed




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