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it has already passed


Author: CFHillyard
ASL Info:    22/M/Washington state
Elite Ratio:    1.91 - 53 /36 /13
Words: 171
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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i guess its time to move on


it has already passed



So now its time for a new begining
one lacking all of my sinning
can i do it do i believe?
i dont know but i do at least have the will to achieve

can i stop the lying?
does it even matter that now im trying?
i do my best to survive
i never meant to bring down anothers life
its just what i do
it is me through and through

but i guess its up to me to end this loop
no need to grow old with eyes that sag and droop
im gonna rewrite my family tree
going to make sure everyone remembers me

so dont say goodbye
just remember when you see me please say hi
cause this is already the past
something we all know can never last

so if ever again you see me around
just say hi, you wont look a clown
and remember this, i dont forget the past
even though i do know
it has already passed




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  So, have you changed?
| Posted on 2006-11-15 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]
  So, have you changed?
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