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    dots Submission Name: Elegant Trickerydots
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    Author: Glassy Eyed
    ASL Info:    17/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 550/427/187
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 253
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 964



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    dotsElegant Trickerydots
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    Lightly she sighs with the wind,
    Sitting in a field of glory.
    Radiance emanates her,
    And she knows everyone loves her.

    Her grandeur only precedes her,
    But the spoken word does her no justice,
    The concept that anyone could not love
    Such magnificent a creature,
    Never even occurs to her.

    She holds herself high,
    On a pedestal of gold
    And no one ever questions it;

    But late at night,
    Once she takes off her mask,
    And becomes who she was born to be,
    She becomes what no one should see.

    Her radiance fades with setting sun,
    Her pedestal falls to the ground
    If anyone saw her at this time,
    They would scream with utter terror.

    For all her loveliness during the day,
    It equals her horror at night,
    It’s only obvious that someone so fake,
    Would hide from their true life.




    Submitted on 2006-11-12 15:04:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What does this mean?
    What I get is everyone has a dark side, including perfection? No one sees the horrible beast she is?
    hummm... I like it and your choice words.
    Stands out nicely, and has color to it.
    Keep it up.

    -bloody-
    | Posted on 2006-11-12 00:00:00 | by _bloody_kiss_ | [ Reply to This ]



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