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what happened to halloween? doning masks and roaming streets Children asking trick or treat? But merely seeking candy Parental concerns for safety Have placed the festivities In churches and shopping centers Warm and sheltered, children enter Conviently recieving more candy And burning fewer calories; Capitalism at it's finest Diabetes and obesity are on the rise Now we've decided Fresh air and exercise Are too risky to be Activities for our children It seems Parents are unwilling or unable To provide supervision Prison stripes and archetypes Are far less frightening indoors We've taken out the effort And gone straight to the reward Glory is slowly Being murdered in this world A stranger's kindness can't be trusted Or so we're taught as boys and girls Diversity it seems Has become a dangerous thing We put on costumes daily In the hope that they might bring Some much needed excitement To simple little lives We block violent content from our TV's Then go home and hit our wives Perhaps we've been misguided Though some fears are justified At what point does parental paranoia Remove the joy from children's lives? Avoiding such dangers might Keep our children safe But what's the point of living In a prison bound with chains Restrained by the possibility They might be taking risks Perhaps the fear of HIV Will deprive them of their first kiss Perhaps attending home school Will prevent loss of friendship Perhaps the fear of drowning Will keep them from skipping stones over water Or perhaps we'll realize our folly And grant more freedom to our sons and daughters. |
wow that was wicked cool....keep writing! | Posted on 2008-04-22 00:00:00 | by Kornfreakinabox | [ Reply to This ] | Great society poem, I really love the end, it makes you think about whats really going on. No changes I would really make, just like I always say, I can never find a flaw with any of your work, but I guess thats my problem. Great flow, great imagery, blablablabla. yeah. | keep it up flora | Posted on 2007-03-06 00:00:00 | by blankscreen | [ Reply to This ] | A very big issue to talk about. Good writng. It seems like you gave this alot of thought. | | Posted on 2007-02-20 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ] | This isn't really my cup of tea, as far as the reason it was written, however that didn't stop me from reading it through. I thought it was interesting, and was more of a persuasive poem, or atleast stating your opinion, I suppose it wasn't really trying to persuad per say. Anyways, it was nice to read something that wasn't just another love poem, and your almost monologue like writing was also a nice mix up. | | Posted on 2007-02-07 00:00:00 | by Ygi | [ Reply to This ] | This is in your journal, right? I read it there as well, and I must say I heartily concur. You've hit on all the reasons parents shelter their children even more these days: unwilling/uncaring, unable, or overprotective. | (mine were the third type.) What does it all mean? A reflection of the times? Of isolationism and Amercian foreign policy and fear on an individual level? I think maybe all... In keeping children safe and alive, some have forgotten to let them live. (Don't worry. When they go off to college they'll let it all out... just think: all that repressed desire to do crazy things just BAM! .... an entire generation at once. Won't that be something?) | Posted on 2006-11-13 00:00:00 | by lukewarm | [ Reply to This ] | |