Description: Um...half oldschool, half modern-ish, it's modeled after my journal entry. There may or may not be different styles, so...*shrugs* Be brutal.
Ne'er Again -------------------------------------------
How dare you know me?
How dare you care?
How do you know
When I’m just not there?
How can you feel
My smile as it disappears?
How dare you look?
How dare you?
How do you interpret
My own private looks?
Those looks are not for you;
You had your chance, but now ‘tis gone.
And who am I
To dare you?
How dare I question
What you always knew?
How can I look without hating you?
By the reason of another, it is true.
Still the fault is mine
As well as yours:
For a look must first be given
Before it is received,
And a memory is to be remembered
‘Fore it is conceived.
The sin is mine alone
And mine alone to bear!
My robes of white are stained
Bloodred. I have fallen to my knees.
The stain of lusting along with guilt
Is ne’er to be washed out again.
Forsooth I still will question
How much truth your soul can bear…
You are still a liar by sight
Yet sometimes a lover by act.
You have changed so much, my friend;
Still I will ne’er trust you again.
It looks pretty good. I especially like the way you use an appostrophe with never. it works so well. what a coincidence that it worked out that way for the title as well. anyway i like it....
Submission Name: Ne'er Again
