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    dots Submission Name: The Treedots
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    Author: Maevity
    Elite Ratio:    7.03 - 48/48/22
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       Contemplation on the top of a hill.....


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    dotsThe Treedots
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    It weeps—
    the sad tree
    in desolation

    and solitude

    upon the lone summer hill
    green with the dew
    and perriwinkle with wild thistles
    scatterd ‘neath it

    It sighs—
    the grey miser
    in longing

    bent with age

    as the winds twist and turn
    into whips of white ice
    chilled with the screams and howls
    in caustic echoes

    It calls—
    the solitary creature
    left

    with nothing else

    as all has moved on
    as the wind swept it away
    and the sands of time ate at the Earth
    alone




    Submitted on 2006-11-12 21:01:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is really beautiful. a wonderful poem that reflects upon the deepest of human emotions. for me it's a bit sad, a poem of longing and loneliness, but i've always been a fan of those, lol. i never thought i could really relate to a tree.. ;) this is really good, keep it up! hope to see more of your writing :)
    - kez
    | Posted on 2006-11-13 00:00:00 | by everafter | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't know why I like this. It is beautifully worded and with many interpretations.
    I saw an old man sitting beneath a tree moaning and whinning for some reason.
    Perhaps life was too much and dressed with the desperation of lonliness. It seems that the person dies an agonizing death with the connotation of "screams and howls" yet the sad part was the world cared not.
    | Posted on 2006-11-13 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]



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