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    dots Submission Name: The Onlydots
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    Author: Mykquillion
    ASL Info:    20/M/NEB
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 109/124/41
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 720
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    Bytes: 264



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    dotsThe Onlydots
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    The softest of features
    The tenderest of hearts
    And understanding that I cannot understand.
    Her hand holds,
    Her soul supports,
    And she will never see
    All that she is to me.
    Her parents need to be thanked.




    Submitted on 2006-11-13 01:19:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice poem short but yes sweet.
    "Her parents need to be thanked. "
    thats a nice line,its different, never heard it in a love poem before,but it was good.
    "And understanding that I cannot understand"
    i think all men think like this when it comes to the female sex, and i dont mean that in a negative way.women just seem to understand certain things in life that we dont.nice work.
    | Posted on 2006-11-14 00:00:00 | by bogeyman | [ Reply to This ]
      Aww. wow. Geez. See...Im speechless. :)

    This one is so sweet.
    Almost brings tears to my eyes. :)
    I loved the:
    "And understanding that I cannot understand"
    Thats some crazy true stuff.

    Absolutely great write.
    | Posted on 2006-11-13 00:00:00 | by dreamer37517 | [ Reply to This ]


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