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    dots Submission Name: Your Just Like Herdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 614
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 748



    Description:
       Ok When My Bf Broke Up With Me He Told Me I Was Just Like Her aka His Ex Gf Who Ruined His Life So This Poem Is Just Sumfin About What Those Four Words Mean To Me And Just How Much They Affect Me


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    dotsYour Just Like Herdots
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    How Dare You Say It To Me
    As You Look In My Eyes
    You Supposedly Love Me
    Was It All A Lie
    I Gave You My Heart
    Thats All i Had
    You Ripped It To Peices
    And Handed It Back
    Four Simple Words
    Cause So Much Damage
    Many Nights Of Crying
    An Unforgiving Pain
    I Loved You With All I Had To Give
    But It Wasnt Enough To Keep You Here
    Although Its Over Those Very Words Haunt Me
    Make Me Feel Useless, Stupid Unimportant Inside
    Im Glad You Happy And That Youve Moved On
    But Remember Where You Have Left Me
    Alone And Cold Crying Myself To Sleep
    In An Empty Room In An Unmade Bed
    Lay This Young Girl With A Bullet In Her Head




    Submitted on 2006-11-13 02:45:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i understand my ex ex boyfriend told me the same thing then he cheated on me now im relizeing im glad i didnt believe he was nothing but a liar he didnt love me
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Cara R.D | [ Reply to This ]
      Very deep, I wasn't expecting the ending. A truely awsome write.
    Keep it up,
    -Jenny
    | Posted on 2006-11-29 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]
      moving on is sumfing tat neva happens 4 sum people it juz seems lyk they have or maybe they r forced 2 move on
    | Posted on 2006-11-22 00:00:00 | by brokenbylove | [ Reply to This ]
      it's amazing how someone u love can hurt you with what they say, and it's easy to say to move on, but when ur truely hurt it's not so easy. good write, love the emotion in this, sry u had to hurt to write it but i like it alot. just keep in mind that karma will always come around to kick him in the ass, so keep ur head up and know things will get better.
    | Posted on 2006-11-13 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]


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