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    dots Submission Name: The Symphony Insidedots
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    Author: Cora Windover
    ASL Info:    1,292/it/Radiant Garden
    Elite Ratio:    4.15 - 862/763/204
    Words: 344
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 1059
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2124



    Description:
       'the symphony inside' is my favorite image from the chorus, so *shrugs* it's the title. This is one of those hard-to-name songs... o_O if anyone has another suggestion they can make it.



    As for categorizing... this one was really hard. I considered 'Serious', 'Longing', 'Love', and almost went with 'Depressed' but I realized that although it begins depressing, it doesn't really end that way... enh whatever it's misc now! (pronounced "misk", of course ~.^)


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    dotsThe Symphony Insidedots
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    Speak softly, for the light is dear
    Listen to the whispers in your ear
    As the night draws near
    The candle wax is slowly sinking
    The ring of light is slowly shrinking
    And they leave you thinking

    Why canít you speak her name?
    It would take a little more than pain
    To drive that face away
    The ring of light is slowly draining
    The silver moon is slowly waning
    And they leave you waiting...

    The answers will appear
    If you listen very hard
    If you tune in to the rhythm
    Of the beating of your heart
    If you open up your eyes
    To the symphony inside
    If you let the music heal the pain
    And open up your mind

    Speak softly, on this winterís night
    The diamond stars will fade to daylight
    And soon it will be bright
    The silver moon is slowly dying
    The crystal tears that youíve been crying
    And they leave you sighing...

    The answers will appear
    If you listen very hard
    If you tune in to the rhythm
    Of the beating of your heart
    If you open up your eyes
    To the symphony inside
    If you let the music heal the pain
    And open up your mind

    Fly upon a strain of sound
    A crimson melody
    The overture of moving on
    The serenade of spring
    The only peace that you can find
    Within your wildly grieving mind
    Perhaps, some day, in heavenís realm
    Youíll find the one you love again

    The answers will appear
    If you listen very hard
    If you tune in to the rhythm
    Of the beating of your heart
    If you open up your eyes
    To the symphony inside
    If you let the music heal the pain
    And open up your mind

    Speak softly, love
    And tune in to your heart
    You will find the answers
    If you listen very hard
    Believe that I am with you
    As I would always say
    Just let the music heal your wounds
    Weíll meet again someday




    Submitted on 2004-05-28 14:57:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is such a great song. I can hear a melody and that helped me to understand straight away. The chorus is so touching, so well worded, so...everything. This is going in my favs, well done on a great write! All your work is great, I hope you keep going!
    | Posted on 2004-05-28 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this. It's something I've been struggling with lately myself. trying to...do...

    "If you tune in to the rhythm
    Of the beating of your heart
    If you open up your eyes
    To the symphony inside
    If you let the music heal the pain
    And open up your mind"
    .
    .
    "If you listen very hard
    Believe that I am with you"

    }:


    nice poem.
    | Posted on 2004-05-28 00:00:00 | by pawnee | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a very beautiful piece. I can imagine this one being a choral piece, with the violins. I think of Titanic, Celine Dion. I'm always off the mark with your songs though Anyway, I like it. The next time I get in a rut, and need to be cheered up I'll come back to this one. Nice Work
    | Posted on 2004-05-28 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]
      It really deserves the title - symphony inside. Well, marvellous, but one flaw (I think), when I read lyrics I always try to find the melody, and your songs definitely got a beautiful one, but the length of it makes it all very... complex. There are no exact chorus parts, so without music it might 'sound' messy. Anyway, it's really good - you use words with such perfection and taste - yes, there is symphony inside, inside us and your poem as well. :) Lots Of Love.
    | Posted on 2004-05-29 00:00:00 | by Nightraven | [ Reply to This ]


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