this piece, in my mind, presents a dreamer who is repeatedly shoved back into reality. he wants to adore her beauty, her smile... then he remembers that it is not him that she smiles for. reminds me strongly of being a teenager. youre always wanting someone you cannot have, mainly because the person you want likes someone else. -sigh-
its a good piece, i like the message it portrays to me.
I love this one, I read it earlier, but didnt have time to comment. It reminds me of someone that one wants to have but can never truely have. Someone cares so deeply, they take joy in the smallest things, mostly overlooked, but are still not ever able have it.
Your wordings and comparisons are just brilliant. :) They put the perfect touch to it.
Was this written for the picture specifically? Would be even beter of you did the picture, the bit about canvas makes me think this.
And if so... She looks like she is smiling to herself, your descriptions are accurate and pretty to bounce around off the tongue that talks in my head...don't know if that makes sense, ah well, no matter...I thought this was at the very least presented very well, lovely lovely.