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    dots Submission Name: Dieing in the Darkdots
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    Author: D.C.M.
    ASL Info:    18/M/TN.
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 73/107/71
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 171
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 882



    Description:
       Written on top of "Screaming in the Dark". I reread "Screaming in the Dark" and decided it could be something more. So I made it a little longer, and a few minor changes to the begining. Hope you like it, and tell me what you think.


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    dotsDieing in the Darkdots
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    Sometimes I wake in a cold sweat.
    Heart beating way to fast.
    Blood slowly dripping down my flesh.
    And tears falling, way to fast.
    I think of your beautiful face.
    The blood is slowly haulting.
    While the tears begain to stain.
    I fall asleep, once more.
    I wake, in a cold sweat
    Blood quickly flowing from my veins.
    As I scream your name one more time.
    Screaming, into the dark.
    I love you!
    And that's all you'll ever hear.
    "I love you!"
    As I lay here, screaming in the dark.
    I think of y ou and wounder.
    Are you dreaming of me?
    Probably not I sigh.
    Go to sleep just one last time.
    Again I arise in icy sweat.
    Blood gushing from my wrist.
    "I love you!"
    I scream again.
    Dieing in the dark.




    Submitted on 2006-11-14 07:30:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow. INTENSE!! Great write.
    | Posted on 2007-05-19 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]



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