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    dots Submission Name: Fasten Your Seatbelts Kiddies...Redonedots
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    Author: Glassy Eyed
    ASL Info:    17/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 550/427/187
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 224
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1043



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    dotsFasten Your Seatbelts Kiddies...Redonedots
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    Fasten your seatbelts kiddies,
    Your in for the ride of your life.
    We’re gonna show you what’s up,
    So take a hold of your knife.

    'The optimistic will not survive!'
    The cynics cry out in hate,
    'The predominate pessimists,
    Will accumulate!'

    Their savage system of supply and demand,
    Will only feed their greed,
    As with generation after generation,
    They slowly plant the seed...

    To buy, to buy
    To spend and spend,
    Theses are
    The latest trends.

    We’re going now,
    Don’t fall behind
    Take a back seat to "Progress"
    And they won’t be kind.

    Be what they fear,
    And give them a scare,
    They’ll look to the heavens
    And send up a prayer.

    So be something original
    And not part of a chain,
    Someone who has ideas,
    Who has a fucking name;

    Cuz you don’t wanna end up like them.




    Submitted on 2006-11-14 15:03:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, this is really great work. my first thought after reading the name of the poem were, now this sounds interesting, different from what i expected, good job, a nice angry poem, i like poems like this.there is one line though
    "And they won’t be kind"i didn,t think it fitted right somehow, it,s just my opinion, i might have said the blind are leading the blind,definetly different from your other work that i,ve read but i loved it .
    | Posted on 2006-11-14 00:00:00 | by bogeyman | [ Reply to This ]



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