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    dots Submission Name: virgo of the devalued personalitydots
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    Author: Circe Incarnate
    ASL Info:    23/Grrrl/Pissburgh
    Elite Ratio:    0.89 - 0/2/8
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 605
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    Description:
       about a girl.


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    dotsvirgo of the devalued personalitydots
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    you strike me as ready to roll.
    secretive opportunist, you use us like stepping stones.
    your beauty becomes tarnished to me,
    and that is why you have recruited others.
    the owl's watchful eyes have been on you for a long time now,
    the smells of burning flesh and feathers haunting you.
    you may have admirers, but cross me off your list.
    I've seen through your transparent fašade for a long time now.
    What's mine is not yours and never will be.
    The time of my contortions for you has ended.
    You strike me as truly dull,
    actually.




    Submitted on 2006-11-14 15:08:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know the kind of people who are popular but at the same time empty and faceless. This was very metaphorical and the style you used was more then excellent. I like the expressions, love the word choice and order and this piece is as a conclusion a very good poem.
    | Posted on 2006-11-15 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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