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    dots Submission Name: Burning Wingsdots
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    Author: Glassy Eyed
    ASL Info:    17/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 550/427/187
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 190
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    Bytes: 375



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    dotsBurning Wingsdots
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    Wings gracefully float on warm air,
    Drifting and swaying back and forth
    Across my sight for mere seconds

    Then the light hits you through the glass,
    Just the right way, and
    Your gracefulness is ever forgotten,

    As wings of beauty burn
    Shriveling under the heat
    Scorching the pain into your mind.




    Submitted on 2006-11-14 16:24:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ouch. crash and burn, indeed. you did good with ripping away the peaceful image and thrusting the painful image at us. nice write.

    i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
    | Posted on 2006-11-15 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]



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