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    dots Submission Name: masksdots
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    Author: GOGO1877
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 33/138/89
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       this is not about not finding "the one". its about not realizing that it'lll come to you. you dont need everyones aproval. But at the same time, there will always be that one person who you care for, that doesn't think of you the same. Doesn't taht drive you crazy?


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    it's not wanting a hug or a kiss
    its a human
    it's like watching cars get hit
    feeling useless

    * like the masks i wore when i was a child
    I try to hide the way you drive me wild
    like the cotumes we wore on halloween
    using make-up i cover up me
    its not me

    I wish I could buy you in a store
    but I'm broke
    I could be so much more
    but I'd choke

    'cause I see you standing there
    from a distance I stare
    It attaks all the good in me
    I covered up jealousy

    *

    I go from group to group
    asking everybody
    "who loves me?"
    no hand would be raised
    I would sit looking amazed
    but I shouldn't be

    it's pathetic
    it's impossible
    it's like running in heels







    Submitted on 2006-11-14 19:22:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      So true. That no matter how much you can love someone and show them that, they will not love you back if they don't feel the same.

    it's pathetic
    it's impossible
    it's like running in heels

    Running in heels IS near impossible...I've tried...I broke the heel...it hurt like hell. I really found this piece completely true, and I think that you are a very good write.

    Continued success, kudos!
    | Posted on 2006-11-14 00:00:00 | by Twisted | [ Reply to This ]



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