Description: NEW! I think i may be getting over the whole depressed poetry thing.
Dance in Continuance -------------------------------------------
As i Take in a breath
and caress my last thought,
you make haste to the battle
thata's already fought.
We danced in continuance,
lost but not speaking;
Awed by the ignorence your
lives are leaking.
Cry without feeling to comfort
the sad.
Don't deal with depression.
It's only a fad.
Does the dark make us evil?
What if satan wore white?
Let us weep for the hopeless.
They're losing the fight.
whoooh... you make me speechless with this one. it kind of makes me rethink the way we live. its very well written. the only typo I see is on the fourth line. I think it's supposed to be that's. Keep writing... you really are a tremendous poet. ali
if satan wore white. beautiful. wonderful. i love it. it's got great flow. brilliant imagry. like drinking kalua and cream. it's got a quiet deep undercurrent of dissatisfaction. keep it up