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    dots Submission Name: Quiapodots
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    Author: angkaw
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    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsQuiapodots
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    a trickle of sweat
    drops from her chin.
    dewdrops glisten against
    the yellow bulb of the bus.

    the sweet smell of sampaguita
    dies against the smell
    of sweaty shirts,
    dried indoors,
    unlit by the sun.

    -quiapo is a place in the philippines where the bulk of working class go to.




    Submitted on 2006-11-14 20:53:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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