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    dots Submission Name: I thought.. I thought...mmm I wasn't thinkingdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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       mmmm... did I think those whom are so close to me could hurt me so much.. yet the pain still surfaces, and my true thoughts come out...


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    dotsI thought.. I thought...mmm I wasn't thinkingdots
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    I thought you were my friend?
    I thought we had something no one else could ever have...
    I thought we both wanted the same things?
    Never in my right mind did I ever think I'd be taking this bottle to the left of me
    And drinking shot after shot
    To drown these sorrows I have of
    You and I!
    I never thought you could have ever put me in such a depression
    That has me lose my mind
    my sight of what is right and wrong...
    I never could have thought...
    Sigh..
    And there's the answer
    I wasn't thinking...
    All the signs...
    All those things you said to me...
    Whats happend in your past...
    I do not dwell I on this event I swear if anything..
    I throw it away to never be found...
    That's if I had a choice
    But I cannot simply forgive and forget
    When day in and day out.
    I am reminded of past events
    That have me shedding tears..
    Oh so many tears...
    And its all because of you and the pain you put me through..
    But hey its as you say...
    That's simply the way I show my Love, Jacquelyn.




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    ||| Comments |||
      hey great write i know how you feel i jus recetly got dumped so i kno how u feel lol great wrwite though
    | Posted on 2006-12-15 00:00:00 | by panzyrocker | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, the things we are capable of doing ! and the pain that we can so eaisly inflict on another without a second thought! Brings me back to HS.
    | Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]


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