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    dots Submission Name: Deja Viewdots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDeja Viewdots
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    the best theorems
    possess the finest
    packaging, such gifts

    are worthy of stirred
    kingdoms, slender as
    a willow swaying to
    a single word

    maelstroms (femaelstroms
    as well, I've heard) whirl
    like liquid firebrands
    in the tumult
    of a paralytic birth

    flesh has been known
    to thrive without intellect

    reason without flesh?
    absurd




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      This piece here is gonna force me to stalk you. I've been saving that last spot for someone who was really potent, since it was my last stalk space. You my friend are worthy of that spot.

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    | Posted on 2006-12-09 00:00:00 | by fryte | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes, I was just reading about Socrates. And that the Sophists came along and began teaching the layman (for a price of course) how to debate an issue and win. And then Pericles claimed he was very wise and Socrates claimed that he himself knew nothing. Because his method of finding truth happened when people talked and found truths on their own.

    And the fact that the mind is not used so much and we accept behavior just because we 've lost truth, puts us in a nihilistic sort of society. There is a right and wrong and we find it because we use our brains. And Socrates method of seeking truth meant we lived closer to our souls.

    the best theorems
    possess the finest
    packaging, such gifts

    are worthy of stirred
    kingdoms, slender as
    a willow swaying to
    a single word

    maelstroms (femaelstroms
    as well, I've heard) whirl
    like liquid firebrands
    in the tumult
    of a paralytic birth

    flesh has been known
    to thrive without intellect

    reason without flesh?
    absurd



    This is superb Bill, really the arrow hits the mark and the theme
    spreads like a vapor. Brilliant.

    Nan
    | Posted on 2006-11-15 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]


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