Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Down the Streetdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: D.C.M.
    ASL Info:    18/M/TN.
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 73/107/71
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 134
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 726



    Description:
       Suicidal moment, that some how got directed at little kids toward the end.. and no I do not recomend suicide and I would never speak w/ a little kid about it.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsDown the Streetdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Thoughts of bunnys and candy cigarets
    Once filled my mind.

    Now only death and pain cross my eyes.
    Suicide is my ultimate demise.

    Cutting veins across the wrist will never do!
    Its down the wrist, towards the elbow.

    Thats the sure fire way to go.
    As I sit here, writing this in blood.

    Just remember, this is now my nitemare.
    Coming undone.

    No more living in this lonesome hell.
    No more wanting to be with your beauty.

    So just remember kids, its down the road.
    Not across the street.

    That's the only way to go.
    It makes hell come faster, that's a promisie.




    Submitted on 2006-11-15 07:02:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I liked how this was nosalgic for the days of wonder in a childhood long past. I also think the two lined stanzas worked well with this. Not to much but just right. However, even down the road, is a long way to suffer
    | Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.