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    dots Submission Name: I Feel Numbdots
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    Author: Childe-Wrote
    Elite Ratio:    1.86 - 17/47/39
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsI Feel Numbdots
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    Spiraling to the ground fast,
    Reality hit her hard...
    She hit the ground with full force,
    and noone was there to help her up.

    This girl learned her lesson...
    Nomore will she breath,
    Nomore will stupidity slip out of this mouth,
    And nomore will this girl smile,
    Cause reality isn't worth laughing about.
    And nomore will she shed a tear,
    Cause no boys are worth her tears.
    And the last time, she would have fun,
    Cause life isn't a thing to joke around with.

    She learned her lesson and she will become
    Silent, and strong
    And she will pretend...
    Everything is alright even if that's a damn lie.

    Pretend that your a princess in a cardboard castle,
    And smile when no one's looking.
    Laugh cause that's all you could do,
    Cause reality is just a joke..
    And those words that have no meaning,
    Disappeared from existance.

    When she hit the ground,
    she stayed down,
    Cause it's not worth making the same mistakes
    And she realizes just how numb she feels.




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    ||| Comments |||
      I don't mind the sensation of numbness my mom says it isn't a good way to live but I don't care. I hope you feel better.
    | Posted on 2007-04-26 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
      GOD that feeling sucks... doesn't it? anyway... hope things get better for ya. hahaha
    | Posted on 2006-11-15 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]


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